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Cold & Heartless: A Naked Contribution Statement

Author
David Oaks
Published
Sun 30 Jan 2022
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What you will learn in this episode:

Never send out a contribution statement outlining the donor’s giving for the previous year without saying thank you, you are needed, and your giving made a difference.

A "news-letter" is just a one-page personal letter with: 

  • A short personal greeting
  • A statement telling the donor that this letter is about their impact
  • A summary of their impact
  • A story introduction
  • A story about one beneficiary
  • A bragging statement of the donor's generosity
  • A thank you
  • A signature (from one person)
  • A scannable headline with the word "You" in it
  • A high ratio of "you" to "we/us/I" - at least 2:1
  • A customized reply device with a scannable headline, "My next gift..."
  • With action copy
  • A reply envelope

Some things a news-letter doesn't have:

  • Any mention of the organization's name in the copy
  • Any mention of the donor helping the organization
  • Any mention of the organization doing anything

See the examples of great news-letters HERE

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