Episode 87: Ascendancy: Sword and Sorcery Critique
Author
Leslie Watts, Story Grid Certified fiction editor
Published
Wed 14 Dec 2016
Episode Link
https://writership.com
In this episode, Leslie and Clark critique the opening of Ascendancy, a sword and sorcery novel by A. B. Corley. They discuss transitions between scenes, tweaking dialogue so that the characters are distinguishable, and diction in dialogue.