Episode 26 - The Messengers, Paranormal Mystery Critique
- Author
- Leslie Watts, Story Grid Certified fiction editor
- Published
- Wed 02 Sep 2015
- Episode Link
- https://writership.com
Leslie & Alyssa critique the first five pages of Anthony Greer’s The Messengers. They discuss passive voice, character engagement and sympathy, including telling (not repetitive) detail, word choice, and straying from POV.
