Episode 24 - The Feedback Loop, Cyberpunk Techno Thriller Critique
- Author
- Leslie Watts, Story Grid Certified fiction editor
- Published
- Wed 19 Aug 2015
- Episode Link
- https://writership.com
Alyssa & Leslie critique the first section of Harmon Cooper’s The Feedback Loop. They discuss how the POV and tense works for the genre, repetitive sentence structure, and dialogue (and its punctuation).
