Episode 22 - Tristan, Science Fiction/Revenge Critique
- Author
- Leslie Watts, Story Grid Certified fiction editor
- Published
- Wed 05 Aug 2015
- Episode Link
- https://writership.com
Alyssa & Leslie critique the opening chapter of Kindar Ra Harashal’s Tristan. They discuss repetitive sentence structure, passive voice, sentence fragments, and intrigue versus melodrama.
