Episode 20 - Walrus of Death Urban Fantasy Critique
- Author
- Leslie Watts, Story Grid Certified fiction editor
- Published
- Wed 22 Jul 2015
- Episode Link
- https://writership.com
In this episode, Leslie and Alyssa critique the opening pages from Steeven R. Orr’s Walrus of Death. They discuss appropriate humor and how it can benefit your story, judicious pruning for a smoother reading experience, setting reader expectations with character appearance, and great hooks.
