23. The Biggest Mistakes in Fiction Books (and how to fix them!)

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In this episode of Show, don’t Tell Writing, Suzy breaks down the top five mistakes she frequently sees in fiction manuscripts—and how to fix them. No matter where you are in the writing process, this practical advice will help you avoid the pitfalls that can derail your book's success. From poorly chosen endings to bloated word counts, Suzy explains how addressing these issues can transform your story and keep readers engaged.

Resources Mentioned:

• “Slay Your Bloated Word Count”

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